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My Harris Burdick Writing

4/29/2014

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Luana
4/29/2014 01:42:50 am

KJ, I liked your story a lot because at the end it was all just a prank from DK, and one other cool thing that I think was really cool is that it all actually made sense.

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Luana
4/29/2014 01:45:29 am

KJ, I have a question: Would there be a following chapter to the story?

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Kyungjoon
4/29/2014 07:07:23 am

I am not sure but probably not :)

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Luana
4/29/2014 01:48:25 am

KJ, my suggestion for you to make your story better is to read over your story and check for spelling, grammar, or any accident mistakes in your story.

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Sally
4/29/2014 02:11:51 am

KJ,
I liked that you put DK in the story, but you could put more details in the story like how it was scary or stuff like that...Why did she do a prank on DK(question mark).

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